The Song Of the Brass Key/My Little Castagnette

[morwen9]

karaokescene.com/ss/song.php?id=91545
The Song Of The Brass Key- lower

www.youtube.com/watch?v=WNaU6mduZus
My Little Castagnette

Can I please have constructive criticism on each one? I didn't get any on the last video I posted. I wonder if everyone's scared off by my voice in hay fever mode. It's gone on for months. All I can do is wait.
I promise you, I sound a lot better without a stuffy nose.
As it says above, I transposed the TSOTBK backing to a lower key due to suggestions it was too high. I recorded these when I thought my hay fever was clearing up.

I hate having hayfever. The thing is that I think it's gone, but then bam! it's back. I get it every winter and it lasts for months. .
And the other problem is, I really want to be a professional singer. And you can't do that if you always have hay fever.

[morwen9]

I'll wait until my hay fever has really cleared up and post more recordings on these songs and another song for constructive criticism. Note: The second one has a LONG intro.

Again, I THOUGHT it was clearing up. Would particularly like to hear Nicola's comments.

[heartsong]

If your hay fever effects you year round, I would recommend seeing an Allergist and see what they can do for you. Knowing what causes the problem can help a lot.