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Post by Beachguy on Oct 17, 2016 0:57:06 GMT
Look up how to write a song > it is not hard at all , read the songs of the Beatles , very simple meaning in most of their songs an also short an repeats of lyrics , love is all you need , just match some ending words , I wrote 3 for Jackie an send them years ago , yikes , I don't know if I kept a copy  , the music is of most important as very young children have contest of writing even poetry of words but the music sells the drum beats of the ears  ......................... ) Bushes quiver where shadows lean And not a sliver of moon is seen |
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Post by juxtaposer on Oct 17, 2016 3:45:55 GMT
Look up how to write a song > it is not hard at all , read the songs of the Beatles , very simple meaning in most of their songs an also short an repeats of lyrics , love is all you need , just match some ending words , I wrote 3 for Jackie an send them years ago , yikes , I don't know if I kept a copy , the music is of most important as very young children have contest of writing even poetry of words but the music sells the drum beats of the ears ......................... ) Bushes quiver where shadows lean And not a sliver of moon is seen It isn't hard, especially if you make use of some of the devices poets and songwriters use, but end results will vary depending on any number of things. The repeated line or phrase is an age old poetic devise, often used at the end of a verse or chorus, but it can be anywhere. The catchier it is the better. Bob Dylan is a master of this, eg. "Shelter from the Storm", "You're Gonna Make Me Lonesome When You Go" etc. Often the whole song is built on that one catchy line that comes to mind. |
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 17, 2016 12:34:09 GMT
Look up how to write a song > it is not hard at all , read the songs of the Beatles , very simple meaning in most of their songs an also short an repeats of lyrics , love is all you need , just match some ending words , I wrote 3 for Jackie an send them years ago , yikes , I don't know if I kept a copy , the music is of most important as very young children have contest of writing even poetry of words but the music sells the drum beats of the ears ......................... ) Bushes quiver where shadows lean And not a sliver of moon is seen It isn't hard, especially if you make use of some of the devices poets and songwriters use, but end results will vary depending on any number of things. The repeated line or phrase is an age old poetic devise, often used at the end of a verse or chorus, but it can be anywhere. The catchier it is the better. Bob Dylan is a master of this, eg. "Shelter from the Storm", "You're Gonna Make Me Lonesome When You Go" etc. Often the whole song is built on that one catchy line that comes to mind. thanks , yes an he just won with pop music the Nobel Prize in Literature , very rare indeed , big song from the VN war |
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Post by 0 on Oct 17, 2016 14:25:02 GMT
"And I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no mo" 
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2016 17:48:43 GMT
Sunday Service for anyone > a casual pursuit of spirituality , there is just a smallish space where faith might fix into a life so one may check the " spiritual but not religious " box , right smack in the bland majority of people who find ancient religions dull but find themselves uniquely fascinating , people are on the rise , the " Nones " those not affiliated with any religion , are agnostic , atheist an are now almost a quarter of the population says a study out of Duke University , 19 million more Nones now than there were in 2007 at 56 million strong an fewer than half of young adults ages 18 to 30 are sure a God exists , in a few years the largest " religion " in the US will be None . > Fact , perhaps it is time for a God besides me to speak up an be heard if there be one .  perhaps ben  , he knows everything of spirituality  I would speak up, but the moderators only allow one person to talk about religion and that's you. |
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 17, 2016 18:26:09 GMT
Sunday Service for anyone > a casual pursuit of spirituality , there is just a smallish space where faith might fix into a life so one may check the " spiritual but not religious " box , right smack in the bland majority of people who find ancient religions dull but find themselves uniquely fascinating , people are on the rise , the " Nones " those not affiliated with any religion , are agnostic , atheist an are now almost a quarter of the population says a study out of Duke University , 19 million more Nones now than there were in 2007 at 56 million strong an fewer than half of young adults ages 18 to 30 are sure a God exists , in a few years the largest " religion " in the US will be None . > Fact , perhaps it is time for a God besides me to speak up an be heard if there be one . perhaps ben , he knows everything of spirituality I would speak up, but the moderators only allow one person to talk about religion and that's you. Spirituality is not religion is it ben ? you sure are a meek person , come on stand up like a man an show what your made of , Clay ? Stardust ?  |
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 17, 2016 18:33:02 GMT
Yikes , Cas43 says not to mention Jackie not wearing a seatbelt an not a good example for the younger sis an bro , Yikes it may be a negative comment , O NO , he thinks she can do no wrong , o brother , just wait a few years , will her angel wings  still be there
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 17, 2016 18:38:46 GMT
Your church says if you miss Mass on Sunday you will go to Hell  Yikes , perhaps they want you there to put your donation $$$$$$$ in the collection basket BTW , I grew up in the Roman Catholic faith as Jackie , the church would print in the church paper how much the family gave to it every week to put shame on the amount , this should have been private between the church an family , that was sinful but they needed the funds to pay the lawsuits against all those priest that preached on Sundays  , book it |
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 17, 2016 19:11:19 GMT
Jackies' positive yearly visit to the pumpkin farm , for her an kids > After it's lid is cut off , the slippy seeds an wet inters scooped out , the inside is cleaned to be dry an pale , carve a silly or scary face , put in a candle an light it , light creeps as shadows into the rind an giving that dark orange look as a skull head , it shines a spooky yellow grin 
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2016 20:29:41 GMT
I would speak up, but the moderators only allow one person to talk about religion and that's you. Spirituality is not religion is it ben ? you sure are a meek person , come on stand up like a man an show what your made of , Clay ? Stardust ? The terms 'spirituality' and 'religiosity' are synonymous. Simple Definition of spiritual: of or relating to a person's spirit : of or relating to religion or religious beliefs : having similar values and ideas : related or joined in spirit (Source: Merriam-Webster's Learner's Dictionary) Some men know when to be silent.  |
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 18, 2016 13:05:57 GMT
Spirituality is not religion is it ben ? you sure are a meek person , come on stand up like a man an show what your made of , Clay ? Stardust ? The terms 'spirituality' and 'religiosity' are synonymous. Simple Definition of spiritual: of or relating to a person's spirit : of or relating to religion or religious beliefs : having similar values and ideas : related or joined in spirit (Source: Merriam-Webster's Learner's Dictionary) Some men know when to be silent. this is a talking forum an there are 2 out of 3 there that are not religion so it is synonymous in one definition the other two you can talk about if talking religion scares you , good God ben , ones spirit does not have to be Holy |
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Post by Beachguy on Oct 18, 2016 15:09:08 GMT
Seeing members thinking I am not a positive fan I will close down JT on this Day Oct 18th 2016 with in two years over 90,000 views , I invite viewers to go to peeps for Jackie an read stories by Cas43 , more most of members type anyway , an read posts by ben an kari , these will make you all positively happy with the Evancho family , getting a bit too strange for me anyway , i will post comments an write on other threads , I will check out Connie Talbot of UK an Anna Graceman an who I believe have more raw talent as writers of songs an etc . this will make John happy too , no disagreements by members , please be puppets
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Post by 0 on Oct 18, 2016 15:56:15 GMT
Seeing members thinking I am not a positive fan I will close down JT on this Day Oct 18th 2016 with in two years over 90,000 views , I invite viewers to go to peeps for Jackie an read stories by Cas43 , more most of members type anyway , an read posts by ben an kari , these will make you all positively happy with the Evancho family , getting a bit too strange for me anyway , i will post comments an write on other threads , I will check out Connie Talbot of UK an Anna Graceman an who I believe have more raw talent as writers of songs an etc . this will make John happy too , no disagreements by members , please be puppets |
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Post by juxtaposer on Oct 18, 2016 23:08:34 GMT
Seeing members thinking I am not a positive fan I will close down JT on this Day Oct 18th 2016 with in two years over 90,000 views , I invite viewers to go to peeps for Jackie an read stories by Cas43 , more most of members type anyway , an read posts by ben an kari , these will make you all positively happy with the Evancho family , getting a bit too strange for me anyway , i will post comments an write on other threads , I will check out Connie Talbot of UK an Anna Graceman an who I believe have more raw talent as writers of songs an etc . this will make John happy too , no disagreements by members , please be puppets It would be a shame if you did that, Beachguy. I don't doubt that you are a Jackie fan, and in the short time I have been a Jackie fan myself I don't think I've come across a bigger Jackie fan than you, even if not in a conventional sense. What you put out is more challenging to her and her fans, provocative even, but nonetheless you have been Jackie-effected otherwise you wouldn't be doing it. The world needs the trickster, the mudhead kachina to challenge our ways of thinking, and you are particularly good at that. What I don't agree with I am free to take with a grain of salt. It is not a crime to be different or to be wrong. You should stay and keep posting. All the best. |
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Post by jamesn on Oct 21, 2016 18:04:32 GMT
She for sure reads the Instagram comments. They're bytes and quips. None of substance. But she will move the ones she likes closer to the top of the board. Fan feedback, I'm sure is only gauged and considered of value by Youtube views, song and concert tickets sales. The only worthwhile polling is the number of pro and con votes cast in an election. Same for market feedback. Customer surveys have little to no actual influence on a business' decisions. Mostly for good will promo. Agree somewhat , concert tickets ? is a great concern , this Xmas album will IMO be low , so how low is her career ? Agreed, but that didn't stop me from pre-ordering mine today anyway - besides, it's nice to have something NEW to look forward to from Jackie, even if some of it IS recycled! |
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, the music is of most important as very young children have contest of writing even poetry of words but the music sells the drum beats of the ears 
perhaps ben 
, he knows everything of spirituality 
Yikes , perhaps they want you there to put your donation $$$$$$$ in the collection basket 
, book it 
